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March 22, 2011

Constructive Writers Group Feedback

Filed under: Tips and Tricks — Tyler @ 10:00 pm
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An Old Book

Surviving in a writers group takes talent and skill. Some people think that having a nice smile and pleasant comments will be good enough, but a writers group often needs more than that.

The most important part about joining or starting any writers group is to determine the level of professionalism of the group. This does not mean finding out if people are going to wear ties or not. The professionalism you should be interested in…is whether or not one needs to have been previously published before in order to join the group. This question is KEY and once you get your answer you need to dig further.  Does the group view self publishing the same as more conventional methods? Has he group organizer been published before? Once you have these answers you will be able to more easily gauge your comfort levels with the group.

I organize a science fiction and fantasy writers group and whenever there is a new member I clearly state that we all are trying to get published eventually (or in my case, as soon as possible) with a printed hard-copy publisher. And that all of us are in the same boat and we want to share our work and get critiqued and sharpen our skills. It is extremely important to know what you are getting into before opening one’s self to what can be a very personal and yet heart wrenching and exposing experience. Whatever masks we wear in everyday life, a rough draft can remove a few of them within 30 seconds.

So something to think about is what kind of feedback does your group want? Is this a more beginners group for people to share work and mostly get cursory praise and encouragement, or is the group more critical and give feedback regardless of feelings or personal attachments? Both types of groups serve excellent functions, so it is important to determine what kind of feedback you need.

Let’s say you are in a critical group where the people are genuine and have good days and bad ones just like everyone else. The key is to have thick skin and take everything the group says with a few grains of salt. The next thing is that there is such a thing as trash feedback or critique. Simply repeating what you know or comprehend about the excerpt really does not benefit anyone. People want to either know either macro or micro feedback.

Respectively, macro feedback would be critique or impressions on how someone felt about the entire piece and its themes or setting. Or macro could be whether or not a character is compelling or not. Think big picture kind of stuff. People love this kind of feedback, especially on a rough draft because it can tell someone if they are on he right track or not. Now, if there is confusion, then definitely bring that up and discuss that. But simply giving a synopsis of what was just read is unnecessary, and is not critique at all.

Micro feedback is great also. This could be anything like, grammar or style issues. Suggestions on use of commas, or dialogue. Micro feedback is a good way to give specifics that can sharpen a piece. Sometimes giving micro feedback that the other members of the group disagree with is highly valuable. This is because everyone can discuss the method, like writing thoughts with italics vs indirect sentences. Sometimes the discussions can give greater insight into writing style and can shed light on misconceptions. Giving micro feedback should always be targeted at specific areas and pages, so don’t just say, “You use to many commas.” Give actual examples of where the author does something and then read it back to the group so everyone can benefit.

The same concept of giving specific examples during critiques is important for both micro AND macro feedback. This makes the person who shared the work feel like he or she is having the actual story critiqued, instead of the writer herself being knocked down a peg.

Another hugely important thing to think about when going to writers groups, is that if you can’t think of super insightful to say, it is perfectly okay to give a specific example of a sentence that you enjoyed or that worked for you as a reader. This is a great way to start a critique and not everyone may agree with you, so it can also spark discussion. Being positive about a piece is much superior to saying nothing, or else just regurgitating facts about a piece. But remember to be specific, a general, “I liked it,” has very little value. Tell us what quote sparked your interest, or perhaps a certain type of character or setting seemed fresh to you. What was something that if you were a literary agent or publisher, would attract or repel you from the piece? Things like that are great.

A huge tip for being part of a writers group, is that sometimes coming a little bit early can be a ton of fun. As a group organizer, I find that a few minutes before writers group, I really enjoy chatting about peoples’ weeks and writing experiences. This helps to build friendships and can help to establish trust. If there is no trust in a writers group, people can tell immediately and they will probably clam up.

Hopefully some of these tips were useful, and I wish you the best of luck and fun in all your writing endeavors!

-Tyler

March 21, 2011

A great night of dancing and friends at Detroit Bar

Filed under: Reviews — Tyler @ 11:58 pm
Detroit Bar

Detroit Bar

Detroit Bar

843 W. 19th Street
Costa Mesa CA 92627

Detroit Bar usually has good music and friendly staff, but I found last Friday to be an exceptionally great time. Not only did the bartenders and servers look good, but they had great attitudes and made me want to buy a drink here and there. I got zero sass when I ordered a non alcoholic drink either. The music was top notch and there was a good mix of men and women dancing to what seemed like a blend of techno and house music. That’s a good thing because oftentimes at clubs it takes hours for the dance-floor to pick up to anything beyond a male dominated uncomfortable zone. But at Detroit there were girls already dancing in a fun and non-pretentious manner pretty early in the night. The security at the club was present but not overpowering and that made the atmosphere feel safe yet relaxed. The last time I was at Detroit was a few months ago on a Saturday night so this was a great deal of fun.

One thing that I enjoyed about the music and people was that the audience had fun with the builds and swells in the music. People weren’t afraid to bust out a little bit. That’s a plus because I’m 30 years old and I don’t have time for any sissy dance floor garbage. If we’re goona hit it, it’s gotta be 100% or else I’m out. And Detroit didn’t disappoint.

The staff is really good at cleaning up spills and they do it fast for safety so that’s cool.

I’d definitely go to Detroit again. Although I don’t really go clubbing by myself because I don’t drink, I still like the exercise and my abs were monster the next morning.

I was stoked to be at the bar celebrating my friends birthday. I hadn’t seen him in literally years and it was good times.

HERE’s a link to current events and DJ’s at the Detroit Bar!

-Tyler

Why I Unsubscribed to Rift and Why Everyone Else will Shortly Follow Suit

Filed under: Gaming — Nauticaboy @ 8:25 pm

 

Rift Game Logo

Trion Worlds' new MMORPG, Rift, is doomed to fail.

 

The subject line says it all. This game has zero long term appeal. Rift, in essence, is a re-skinned World of Warcraft with public quests, similar to those first seen in Warhammer Online. The UI, the PvP instances, and the “soul system” all resemble traits WoW has. Even the rogue’s “combo points” and finishing moves are a direct rip off from WoW.

If you’ve visited any video gaming website in the last couple of months, you’ve undoubtedly seen a Rift advertisement boldly claiming “We’re not in Azeroth anymore.” I’ve also seen several television commercials for Rift as well. I’ll give it to Trion Worlds. Their marketing efforts peaked my interest enough to pick up the game. They even got me to initially sign up for the “Founder’s discount” 6 month pricing plan. I figured I might as well invest 6 months into the game since I probably needed a couple of months to reach the level 50 cap. I ended up cancelling that subscription plan today and I doubt I’m the only person doing so before the first “free” 30 days expires.

I’m a level 22 rogue after a week of play and everything I’ve done feels like I’ve done it in WoW already. The rifts that open up randomly and create the opportunity for public quests happen so frequently that I feel like I can’t quest normally without being sucked into fighting rifts from hours on end. Frankly, once people begin to unsubscribe to the game as I predict, rifts will be that much more of a nuisance to the players still playing. If the rifts in the game are ignored, they eventually kill the town NPC’s that give out quests; making leveling more difficult.

Before you Rift faithful try and dismiss my opinion by citing the positive reviews Rift’s received already, understand the point I am making. The game itself is polished. My client never once crashed and I didn’t notice any latency issues. If Rift was released before the original World of Warcraft debuted, it would be an absolute hit. However, that isn’t the case – WoW has been out for over 6 years. Case and point: Warhammer Online received very positive reviews as well and had a “successful” launch, yet Mythic Entertainment ended up having two rounds of layoffs a few months after the release. To date, more than half of Warhammer Online’s original servers have been removed/consolidated.

If you haven’t picked up Rift, don’t bother. You might be logging into an empty server.

-Nauticaboy

March 20, 2011

Equilibrium shoots at all the right angles

Filed under: Reviews — Tyler @ 9:45 pm
Equilibrium

Equilibrium is a RAD MOVIE!

If you like seeing geometry in action, especially in the form of martial arts and gun-fighting, then Equilibrium is a great Sci-Fi/Action Film pick. Equilibrium is a movie distributed by Miramax Films and Dimension Films. The movie is a about an emotionless nation-state in a partially dystopian future. Christian Bale, does an excellent job with his performance of the main character, who is a Tetragrammaton Cleric named, John Preston. The movie has elements that are similar to the Matrix and the book Fahrenheit 451, but it is its own unique spin on things. Instead of the enemy being oppressive robots or a system that wants to destroy information, the world depicted in the film is obsessed with destroying emotion evoking items, music, and other media. The thing that the film does the best with the theme and back-story, is that Equilibrium clearly explains the motivations for the government to wish to eradicate such emotional content. And that motivation is a fear of a 4th World War. Yet the system does not just attempt to destroy the emotion inspiring media, it wants to eliminate human emotion entirely through the regimented and society-wide use of pharmaceutical drugs.

Even though Equilibrium was released in 2002, the fact that everyone is on emotion impairing drugs is more relevant today than it was during its release date.

An interesting thing about this movie is that it was attempted to be sold as an action film. Although the few action scenes are quite good, the themes are even better. Some of those themes include, harsh self-realizations, man vs. himself, and self-sacrifice even when the outcome is completely unknown.

One thing that I’ve found with Equilibrium is that it is not actually a social commentary film. Many people may get turned off by the film because they think it is being critical of the current society. When in fact, our society right now does not resemble the culture of Libria (this is the main city in the film) except for the drug issue previously mentioned. The film is more of a vehicle for someone to re-evaluate his or her current life processes and see if that’s the road that they really want to walk. All the gun battles and violence is actually symbolic of internal struggle, and the entire film could have been a virtual experience for the main character and it would have had the same poignant impact for the viewer.

The use of geometry as a tool for gun-based martial arts was beyond awesome and was a perfect story-telling technique. It easily demonstrated the level of skill, expertise and discipline required for the main character to be such an effective marksman and soldier. This gave a substantial amount of mythos to the Cleric fighters in the film. And the slower and more dramatic scenes were a welcomed break from the action. Some people may say that the movie is slow and plodding, but I found it to methodical and quite clear when discussing serious issues.

-Tyler

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